[She bows her head in gratitude for such a remark; the truth was, she was terrified, right now. Scared to death, and had she kept her hands from her sleeves, they would no doubt tremble like her heartbeat. But—when she thinks of the other people involved in this draft, she can't help but mask her fear as much as she can.
seems like a groovy place to end it, though if you want to continue for something extra, that's cool
Quietly,]
Thank you, Archie-san.
Now rest; we'll return you back soon.
[And she waits with him, gun in lap.]