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Luceti Mods ([personal profile] lucetimods) wrote in [community profile] lucetilogs2011-08-27 12:04 pm

Draft Log #3: During v. 2.0

Who: Everyone on the draft
What: Day 3-5
When: August 27th-August 29th
Where: ONCE MORE INTO THE-- ...BEACH
Summary: Like it says above. The draftees reach the beach.
Rating: V FOR VIOLENT BEHAVIOUR!!


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simplestgift: (Please no.)

[personal profile] simplestgift 2011-08-27 07:57 pm (UTC)(link)
[Seeing the Elizabeth go down in flames made Archie feel a little bit like he was waiting at the wrong end of a bridge loaded with explosives and waiting for a sign that may never come. While he commands the jolly boat, he watches desperately for any sign of Jack--even if it's pieces of him floating in the water.

The sea looks empty of him, until by some miracle that familiar body floats to the surface, face-down, as if lifted up by some entity from underneath.]


There! HARD A' STARBOARD! Jack! JACK!

[It looks like he's about to go under again, and they're not coming about quickly enough, so he dives into the water and swims toward the floating pirate.]

[identity profile] hippocraticly.livejournal.com 2011-08-27 08:17 pm (UTC)(link)
[ McCoy turns just in time to witness Archie jump overboard. he looks stricken and braces himself, hands darting out to the side and steadying the jolly boat, trying to keep a level-head as Kennedy splashes his way towards the prone form of his friend. ]

Jack! Archie!
simplestgift: (Bush caaahn't swiiim.)

[personal profile] simplestgift 2011-08-27 08:22 pm (UTC)(link)
[Archie manages to reach Jack and get his face out of the water, but he can't see the man's condition right away. He struggles to bring him back to the jolly boat, going under himself once or twice, but always keeping the pirate's face above water.

When he reaches the side, he sputters:]
Get him up!

[identity profile] hippocraticly.livejournal.com 2011-08-27 08:59 pm (UTC)(link)
[ he nods numbly at Archie's order and reaches to grab the pirate. he struggles to haul him into the boat with him and, of course, the effort itself causes the vessel to tilt unfavourably to the side and the sight of water lapping and licking against the boat strikes renewed fear in McCoy.

but he endures it, holding his breath and heaving with all his might and succeeds in dragging Jack onto the boat with him. he barks out a breathless exclamation to the lieutenant in the water and hopes he's already climbing back in. ]


G-Got him!
simplestgift: (wet and breathless)

[personal profile] simplestgift 2011-08-27 09:07 pm (UTC)(link)
[Archie climbs back in once Jack is in the boat, kneeling at the pirate's side anxiously and awaiting McCoy's word.]

[identity profile] hippocraticly.livejournal.com 2011-08-27 09:17 pm (UTC)(link)
[ McCoy said nothing, but he'd already taken into account the burns that were littering his arms and his chest as he rolled the pirate onto his back, checking his airways. ]
simplestgift: (Upset - We must intervene!)

[personal profile] simplestgift 2011-08-27 09:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Good God. [Archie can't think of a time when he's seen a man this badly burned. He's seen many other horrific wounds, but doesn't know what to make of these except that they are bad and they are on Jack. He feels utterly helpless, seeing him like this, knowing he can do nothing except order the boat back to the Endurance.]

[identity profile] hippocraticly.livejournal.com 2011-08-27 09:47 pm (UTC)(link)
[ the doctor barely hears Archie, but there's one thing he's certain of: they aren't going back to the endurance. not while there are medical facilities waiting them on the shore, which would help more than whatever passed as a sickbay in that rickety old boat Hornblower commandeered.

he may have issued the order to find survivors from the wreckage, but he didn't say anything about coming back with them and he glances over his shoulder, expression taut and serious. ]
Kennedy, get us back to the shore.
simplestgift: (Don't you understand?)

[personal profile] simplestgift 2011-08-27 10:03 pm (UTC)(link)
[If the doctor said it, Archie's not going to argue. He gives the order and the boat comes about, headed directly for shore.] Is he alive?

[identity profile] hippocraticly.livejournal.com 2011-08-27 10:32 pm (UTC)(link)
He's alive. [ he murmurs as he reassesses the other man's breathing and circulation. by some miracle, Jack was still breathing. but he had more than likely swallowed a lot of water and manoeuvres him into the recovery position in the boat. ]
simplestgift: (Please no.)

[personal profile] simplestgift 2011-08-27 10:45 pm (UTC)(link)
[Archie lets out a breath.] It looks bad. Is it bad?
simplestgift: (Upset - We must intervene!)

[personal profile] simplestgift 2011-08-27 10:50 pm (UTC)(link)
[He swallows panic.] Tell me what to do.

[identity profile] hippocraticly.livejournal.com 2011-08-27 11:04 pm (UTC)(link)
I need... [ to get back to the shore, to stop all this rain, to get off this damn ocean. stress took hold and reached for his dermal regenerator. ] you to help me. Get something to cover him up with.
all7seas: (I'll just sit here and bleed at you)

/keywords

[personal profile] all7seas 2011-08-27 11:08 pm (UTC)(link)
[It was bad. The pirate's breathing, such as it was, was shallow and labored. And then it stopped entirely as the shock hit his system.

WHO WOULD SAVE HIM NOW?]
simplestgift: (bloody hell)

[personal profile] simplestgift 2011-08-27 11:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Leonard! [Archie cradled Jack's head, heart leaping into his mouth.]

[identity profile] hippocraticly.livejournal.com 2011-08-28 03:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Damn it, he's going into shock! Archie, put him down!
all7seas: (crimes against the crown)

[personal profile] all7seas 2011-08-28 05:41 pm (UTC)(link)
[The pirate is not responding to either of them. His skin has gone a horrible shade of pale, like that of a dead man.]
simplestgift: (Upset - We must intervene!)

[personal profile] simplestgift 2011-08-28 05:53 pm (UTC)(link)
[Archie obeys immediately. There's nothing in the boat to cover him with, not even Kennedy's own coat, which he'd left on the ship.] He isn't breathing!

[identity profile] hippocraticly.livejournal.com 2011-08-31 04:19 am (UTC)(link)
[ he knows, Archie. but he isn't going to be sarcastic about it and places the heel of his hand in the middle of Jack's chest, fingers interlaced as he presses his other hand on top and begins compressing his chest. ]
all7seas: (your sort of haunted house)

[personal profile] all7seas 2011-08-31 01:20 pm (UTC)(link)
[Still not breathing, though there is a heartbeat. RESCUE BREATHING IS A GO! THE KISS OF LIFE, MAN!]
simplestgift: (Please no.)

[personal profile] simplestgift 2011-08-31 03:22 pm (UTC)(link)
[Waiting with bated breath.]

i hate you both

[identity profile] hippocraticly.livejournal.com 2011-09-03 12:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Damn it!

[ McCoy swears loudly as he tilts the pirate's head back, pinches his nose and breathes into his mouth. kiss of life is a-go. ]
all7seas: (I'll just sit here and bleed at you)

: D

[personal profile] all7seas 2011-09-03 02:47 pm (UTC)(link)
[It takes a lot of kissing. A lot of life kissing. But soon enough, the unconscious man's breathing resumes on its own: shallow, a bit raspy, but breathing nonetheless.]
simplestgift: (Disappointed)

>.>

[personal profile] simplestgift 2011-09-03 02:58 pm (UTC)(link)
[...Weird, but it made him start breathing. Archie stays quiet.]

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